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[Aug. 6th, 2008|10:30 pm] |
edit: this, insdelty, has nothing to do with my exprnces. just to make sure. im fine. the poem, however, pisses me off XD. also, edited last line to make it roll beter.
right. so, at a frinds house, theres a rather self congratltory poem in the loo about perenthood. the first stanza, is, infact, riped enterly from that. its called perents, and the whole thing is
"god made a choice in heven
so very long ago
just who would be our perents
the pair who love us so
who tought us to be carring
show kidness and be fair
be thoughtful to our perents
and the love we share"
quite frankly, this poem just seemd wired. forgetting whos bathroom i found it in, there are clearly instence of abuse. i know why it was writen, but it wriled me. its short sited. so i desied to write my own
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parents (revised)
god made a choice in heven
so very long ago
just who would be our pairents
the pair who loves and so
and in this home without such love
the choice seems rather crule
my brused back speaks a testment
and my emotions a crule prose |
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You're my favourite spare little brother :)
lol. you like my poem of "this poem is stupid" then?
frame it and put it in your bathroom! XD
I think my parents might protest!
tell them its to guide you through your perent hood. then tell them you plan to displin any tikes you may have with your floogers. then wait for the police and child services to pre empt any sprogging that my ever have happend!
step 3: ???
sept 4: profit
Please don't have children.
Please.
Aw, shit.
NO FLOGGING THE MINORS!
You made a childe? Does the Prince know about this? O_O
no 0.0.
but i shall use him to take praxis...then...
I SHALL DELCERE MY ALIGENCE TO THE SABAT!
PRAISE CANE!
NOT MY BATHROOM !!!!!!!
If there was a poem in my bathroom it would be
Chunder in the toilet
Don't wee on the seat
Try and remember what the shower is for
and give your mum a treat
not bad for two minutes at 5:40
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